paraghaphs

Today we have been learning to structure paragraphs.We learnt T.P.T.P. this tells us when to start a new paragraph.It stands for Time Place Topic Person. here are 3 samples of paragraphs I wrote.The classroom is full of furniture.The brown wooden table with carving in it.It looks like it's made out of clay.It is used for our learning.The thick gold chairs look like it is painted gold.It is used to sit on.
The playground at oratia is amazing.The slide looks like a roller coster.It is blue.It is used for sliding on.
The monkey bars look like  vines in a jungle.It is lime green.It is used for swinging on.
The swimming pool is down the back by room 15.
The swimming pool has a deep end and a shallow.It looks very long.small people go in the shallow end and tall people go in the deep end.The pool Is for all ages.It has clear blue water.It is used for swimming in.