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Sick sentences!

These sentences are ‘sick’ and need help to get better. Can you help? Could you add an adverb?

The hippo went in the,deep,cold,green water. It was really,humongously big. It had deadly skin and dagger shaped teeth.

Question time!

What is the creature in the lagoon?

A hippo

What is a lagoon?

A type of lake

What is the creature waiting for?

For its prey

In what way is the surface of the lagoon like a window?

It looks like clear glass

What other creatures might there be in the lagoon?

fish

What makes this animal dangerous, do you think?

It has big teeth

How do you feel about hippos?

Fine

How do you think hippos feel about humans?

frightened

Sentence challenge!

Can you use relative clauses to add extra information to a sentence using who, which, where, when, whose or that?

E.g. The creature, whose vast bulk was hidden beneath the water, glided gracefully towards the bank.

The water,glimmered, it was perfectly still.

The hippo,silently , was waiting for something.

       There was once a magical hippo.It had came from the gods.To help save the hippos.It could heal all hippos and make people stop killing hippos and start saving them.so that's what he did.